Ruth Ozeki’s third novel, A Tale for The Time Being, was not only one of my favourite reads of 2013, but one of my favourite ten books of the decade (2010-19); her debut novel, My Year of Meats, which I came to late, was one of my favourite reads of 2020. It’s such a shame, therefore, to admit that I really did not like her latest book, the 500+ page doorstopper The Book of Form and Emptiness. The basic story at the heart of it isn’t even a bad one; teenage Benny is dropping in and out of school after being diagnosed with a mental health condition, while his widowed mother Annabelle struggles with hoarding and mourns the senseless death of his father, Kenji. All three characters (even though Kenji is dead and doesn’t get much page-time even in flashbacks) are memorable creations, especially Annabelle, who is simultaneously sympathetic and deeply frustrating, a difficult balance for a writer to pull off. (I particularly enjoyed Annabelle’s correspondence with a Marie-Kondo-like figure who wrote a bestselling Zen guide to our relationship with things, Tidy Magic).
And yet, this story, which could have made a good novel half the length of this one, is totally buried in twee narration from ‘The Book’ and saccharine asides about the life of books in general. (‘Books don’t have eyes or hands, it’s true, but when a book and a reader are meant for each other, both of them know it.’). I am really allergic to this way of talking about books, especially within fiction itself, and I’m ready to admit that I may be more annoyed about these cutesy sentences than is truly fair. However, there are other problems with The Book of Form and Emptiness that link to the childishness of its style; it veers off on a pointless tangent with a group of irritatingly quirky misfits, Benny’s ability to hear the voices of inanimate objects goes nowhere, and the end is so ridiculously rushed and unbelievable that I started searching for a meta explanation for it (did The Book make it up?), even though, as far as I can tell, there’s no textual evidence for this. If you really, really adored Marcus Zusak’s The Book Thief, you’ll probably like this; otherwise, my best advice is to read A Tale for the Time Being.
I received a free proof copy of this novel from the publisher for review.
Ann Patchett is a wonderful novelist, but in my opinion, her non-fiction is even better. I adored her memoir Truth and Beauty and her previous essay collection, This is the Story of a Happy Marriage, so I was keen to get my hands on her new collection of essays, These Precious Days. All I can say is, Patchett really has a gift; she manages to make the most trivial essays about her life, things that would seem self-indulgent in the hands of most other writers, somehow work. Knitting, decluttering, cooking Thanksgiving dinner for the first time for a group of stranded college students, not getting a tattoo in Paris; these snippets of prose are all easy and fun to read. I preferred the balance of pieces in This is the Story of A Happy Marriage, which featured fewer, longer pieces of work, as it’s in long-form essays that I think Patchett really shines.
Fortunately, there are some of those longer pieces here as well. I think most readers will find the title essay, ‘These Precious Days’, about Patchett’s almost accidental friendship with artist Sooki Raphael, to be the stand-out, and it does stand out; it’s beautiful and moving and actually helps me make sense of what people mean when they say writing is ‘luminous’. It’s a comforting beacon of an essay about human goodness, life and death. But there were other stand-outs for me as well. I loved Patchett’s wry, thoughtful reflections on choosing not to have children in ‘There Are No Children Here’, and, weirdly, her homage to the children’s writer Kate DiCamillo, ‘Reading Kate DiCamillo’, even though I haven’t read anything by DiCamillo myself and am not sure I intend to. ‘Flight Plan’, which is mostly about her husband Karl’s love of flying planes, demonstrates Patchett’s ability to weave all sorts of disparate material together into a coherent emotional whole, something many essayists attempt but few achieve. There are fewer big hitters here than in This is the Story of a Happy Marriage, and overall, I think it’s a slighter collection. But it’s still so worth reading.
I received a free proof copy of this collection from the publisher for review. It’s out in the UK on 23rd November.
aw sorry to see that you didnt get along with The Book of Form and Emptiness! ive heard generally positive things about it, but nothing really from the people whose reviews i actually read (e.g. you!) — i usually dont tend to love twee narration either so we’ll see how i feel about it once i get to this book…at some point in the future lol 👀
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Have you read anything else by Ozeki? It might be a better place to start!
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Ive read A Tale for the Time Being, but that was AGES ago and idk if id give it the same rating now 🤔 (i think i initially gave it a 4 stars?) i also have My Year of Meats on my TBR!
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I’ve been stuck at around page 200 in my Ozeki proof for ages now. It’s so silly and twee! But I am such an admirer of Ozeki that I expect eventually I’ll push myself through it. It certainly doesn’t compare to her other novels, though.
Really looking forward to the Patchett. What a treat to have new nonfiction from her.
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So sorry to hear you are having the same experience. I did finish the book, so there must have been something to it despite my frustration with the narration. I’m now going to go back and try All Over Creation again – I didn’t get on with it the first time but want to have another go.
I think you’ll love the Patchett, it’s another wonderful collection from her.
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I think also I’m just having trouble with really long books these days. I DNFed the new Doerr and Franzen novels, which are also doorstoppers. Cloud Cuckoo Land because it had silly book stuff like the Ozeki!
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Oh no! I had my eye on Cloud Cuckoo Land but I think I’ll definitely give it a miss!
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It also sounds like it’s trying to be just like Cloud Atlas (which I haven’t read tbf).
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Well, I think I’ll stick with Ozeki’s first two books. Luckily, I still have them to look forward to!
I am so happy to hear you praise Patchett’s nonfiction… I have loved her novels and now can’t wait to read her essays!
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My Year of Meats is great! Patchett is a brilliant essayist, I’ve loved all the non-fiction I’ve read from her.
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How disappointing that Ozeki’s latest didn’t work for you when her earlier books were such favorites. I did love The Book Thief, but based on the quote you shared, I think it’s possible that I would still find this book too twee.
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It is a shame! I actually liked The Book Thief – certainly more than this one!
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